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Animal Adventure stories


L.O: Edit and improve my writing


Today we are going to edit and improve the story we wrote yesterday. Read your story and use the success criteria to tick off the features that you have included in your story.


Remember we have done this lots of time in the classroom.

-See which features you have missed using your success criteria and make a list.

-Choose a sentence you would like to improve using one or more of these features.

-Re-write the sentence underneath your writing-Keep the bits you like and add to them.


When editing your learning use * for adding in extra detail and ^ if you have missed any words out.