Last week I asked you to compose your own story for The Tunnel. Today I would like you to edit and improve your story using the success criteria provided last week. Use the success criteria and tick which features you have included in your story. When you have done this and identified any gaps, you can edit in any of the missing features. Remember to use ^ for a missing word and * if you need to change the whole sentence.
For example, if I noticed that I hadn't included the suffix -ment in my writing, I would need to find a place in my story that I could edit it in:
Jack loved the excitement of playing outside with his friends.
Also, make sure you have included capital letters at the start of ALL of your sentences.